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摘要:在TOEFL Junior写作中,TOEFL Junior考生总是会犯这样那样的错误。下面,我们就来看看在TOEFL Junior写作中的一些常见错误,TOEFL Junior考生们可要避免哦~

  在TOEFL Junior写作中,TOEFL Junior考生总是会犯这样那样的错误。下面,我们就来看看在TOEFL Junior写作中的一些常见错误,TOEFL Junior考生们可要避免哦~

  一、主谓不一致

  例子:She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.

  改为:She is a good friend of mine that I have known for a long time.

  错误分析:注意主谓搭配需要保持一致。

  二、并列结构不对称

  例1:I like to eat Japanese food and eating Thai food.

  改为:I like to eat Japanese food and Thai food.

  例2:I was able to raise my test score by studying hard and I read lots of books

  改为:I was able to raise my test score by studying hard and reading lots of books.

  错误分析:当用连词连接几个并列成分时,并列部分需要在形式和结构上保持一致。

  三、表达笨拙 awkward

  例子:Due to the fact of his being late, he missed the beginning of the movie.

  改为: Due to his being late, he missed the beginning of the movie.

  错误分析:“due to the fact of…”表达太啰嗦,赘余

  四、非正式文体-缩写

  例1:I’m tired. 改为:I am tired.

  例2:I can’t help you. 改为:I cannot help you.

  例3:I’ll’ve read thirty books by the end of the year.

  改为:I will have read thirty books by the end of the year.

  错误分析:在正式文体里不要使用缩写形式,如can’t, don't, it's, we'll, they've, 等等。而应当使用cannot, do not, it is, we will, they have, 等等。

  五、非正式文体-滥用低级词汇

  例子:When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed.

  改为:When I arrived home, I was totally exhausted. Therefore I took out a book and lay on my bed.

  错误分析:在写作当中,“get”一词太含糊不清和不正式.因此,建议使用描述更精准accurate和具体specific的词汇。

  六、残缺句 Sentence fragment

  例子:Micronesia’s economy is growing. Because their economists are working hard to improve the economy.

  改为:Micronesia’s economy is growing, because their economists are working hard to improve the economy.

  错误分析:这是中国学生在写作过程中,常犯的错误之一。 “Because their economists are working hard to improve the economy.”是典型的不完整句子。

  七、错误信息 incorrect information

  例子:I am going to see a movie with my friend.

  改为:I am going to see a movie with one of my friends.

  错误分析: 原句表达让人误认为笔者仅有一位朋友。

  八、生造词

  例子:Computers are very helpful and advantageable.

  改为:Computers are very helpful and advantageous.

  错误分析:advantageable 不是英语中的词汇。

  九、滥用介词

  例1:I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday.

  改为:I would like to discuss something important that you mentioned to me yesterday.

  例2:We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch.

  改为:We went downtown yesterday to buy a watch.

  错误分析:在TOEFL Junior写作当中介词的使用情况也是十分让考生棘手的一个问题。通常像downtown, home, there, here 这些副词前面是不需要使用任何介词的。

  上面这些TOEFL Junior写作中的错误,你犯过几个?如果TOEFL Junior考生们发现自己也有这些错误,就赶紧改正吧~

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