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朗阁雅思:利用“原因段”提升雅思写作考试技巧

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   发布日期:2017-05-26 11:22

摘要:任何一篇作文的开头都是非常重要的,能在第一段抓住阅卷老师的注意力基本就拿到了雅思写作考试一半的分数,今天,青岛朗阁将为大家介绍由张仁超老师总结的如何在雅思写作Task 2“Introduction”段提高作文成绩。



  一、2015年5月雅思写作考试真题

  Developments in technology are causing many environmental problems. Some people think that people should choose a simpler way of life. Others think that we should use technology to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  二、朗阁学员原因段展示

  Word count: 48

  Score: 6.5

  Currently, it is true that rapid growth in technology leads to many environmental issues, which has been considerably affecting the sustainable development of the whole nation. From my perspective, the favourable aspects of advanced technology, in tackling environmental problems, carry more weight than those of simple lifestyle.

  三、名师点评

  1. Task response:

  Score 7, 合理引出话题,观点明确

  1). the candidate has introduced the task properly

  2). the position is clear

  2. Coherence and Cohesion:

  Score 7, 全段衔接行文逻辑合理

  the extent are organized and presented appropriately

  3. Lexical Resource:

  Score 6, 无基础性用词错误,且搭配用词稍有亮点

  uses a good range of vocabulary for the task and attempts to use less common vocabulary

  4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy

  Score 6, 无基础性语法错误,且善用复合句结构

  has good control of grammar, especially the use of complex sentences and make no errors

  四、文章原因段结构分析

  1. Background

  2. Public opinions

  3. Personal view/ brief of main body

  即通过一定的现象背景,引出公众的某种或者不同看法,进而表明自我立场。

  五、真题演练

  Interviews form the basic selecting procedure for most large companies. However, some people believe interview is not a reliable means of choosing who to employ and there are some other better methods of selection. Do you agree or disagree? (20151203)

  In modern enterprises, it is true that interviews are the basic method to select employees for most large companies, which has been considerably affecting the prosperity of whole company. (Whereas there has been a cause for a concern: whether other ways, such as recruitment from other firms and promotion from are better than interview.) To my knowledge, the favourable aspects of interviews carry more weight than other means.(65words/26words)

  More and more adults live with their parents after they have finished the education and been employed. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages? (20150430)

  In the contemporary society, it is increasingly common that a host of individuals would live with parents after graduation and being employed, which has been considerably affecting their ability of independence and family cohesion. From my perspective, the positive impacts on convenience and safety of this choose carry more weight than its adverse aspect, the reduce of freedom. (60words)
 

  雅思写作考试的“原因段”在整篇作文中都占据着重要的位置,本文为各位考生介绍了如何写好原因段的方法,相信会对大家的写作有所帮助。

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