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雅思写作“流程图题”的写作方法(下)

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   发布日期:2017-07-08 14:39

摘要:雅思写作流程图题怎么写?

  雅思写作中的流程图题怎样分析?怎么写?上一节中,青岛朗阁已经为各位同学介绍了如何分析雅思写作的流程图题,下面,我们继续上节内容,为大家介绍如何写出优质的流程图作文:
 


 

  四、什么样的语法现象比较常见

  为了让烤鸭们对于上节雅思写作教学中常用的句子有更深入的理解,我把图片(一)的一个流程图片段书写之后的内容呈现给鸭鸭们以进一步解释语法现象:

  (2) Prior to the entire process, preparation with great care is great necessity, (1) involving collection and cleaning. To be specific, (2) Once used bottles (3) are discarded by the customers into the dustbins, they are delivered to the cleaning plant with a van. (4) In order to ensure the bottles clean, high-pressurized water (3) is employed to rinse these collected bottles. Classification is another important phase, (5) which sorts/ categories the bottles by color--- green brown and clear for the further process.

  从上面的标号可以看出,以下几种是常见的语法现象:

  1. 分词伴随状语

  2. 时间状语从句

  3. 被动句式

  4. 不定式短语作状语

  5. 非限制性定语从句

  6. 动名词短语作句子主语或表语
 

  如果烤鸭们觉得仅仅从一个段落就能得出结论的话,那么再看朗阁海外考试研究中心老师写的段落二和三:

  段落二:(2) Once the procedure is completed, concrete reusing procedure can be observed, involving broken pieces, forging, molding and delivery. (2) No sooner are the used bottles rinsed than they are sent to the glass factory, (5) in which they are ground into pieces. The following phase is that these pieces (3) are exposed to extreme heat in a special containment known as furnace. It is worth mentioning that (6) introducing some glass substances into the mold are needed with the purpose of their formation

  段落三:The final process is filling or packing (2) before these new bottles (3) are transported to venues they are needed. (2) After this phase is completed, a new circle is ready.

  烤鸭们,你们能否以上从三个主体段落的编号能否看到常用的语法了?
 

  五、如何避免句子的单调现象

  很多的烤鸭们可能有这样的感受:看了老师写的雅思写作流程图的文章给人的感觉不像自己所写的那样流水账,不能吸引人,怎样练就一手不是千篇一律的句子出来,达到句子的多样性呢?

 

  A. 方法一:

  写文章前多练习单句的表达方式,注意一下我在前面呈现的句子。

  这个是节选《砖头的生产》一个环节:
 


 

  • After fine clay is available on the roller, it is mixed/combined with sand and water.

  • Do not combine sand and water until fine clay is obtained.

  • No sooner is the fine clay obtained than it is combined with sand and water.

  事实上烤鸭们可以在上面朗阁海外考试研究中心的老师编号的语法中专门寻找过程环节进行这样的句子练写,可以避免句子的单调。
 

  B. 方法二:

  注重在描述过程中的clear progression。

  具体解释一下,我将呈现两种写法:(以从烘干到烧制过程为例)
 

  (1). After the wet bricks are molded of the required shapes, they are sent to the drying oven, where they stay for one or two days. The following process is to deliver them to the kiln, in which they are exposed to extreme heat. (200-1300 degrees Celsius)
 

  (2). After the wet bricks are molded of the required shapes, they are sent to the drying oven, where they stay for one or two days. The following process is to deliver them to the kiln. It is worth mentioning that in effort to avoid cracking, bricks dried are exposed to extreme heat in a gradual way. In other words, it is the temperature that ranges from 200 to 1300 degree Celsius.
 

  仔细阅读后,烤鸭们你们知道什么是clear progression? 很显然在(2)的写法里,这个段落显示出烤鸭真正看懂了这个图片,而(1)的写法就稍微欠点火候。可见,对于图表的深层的表达也可以达到的句子的灵活性和多样性。

  雅思写作流程图并不难,难就难在烤鸭们对于它的不了解:包括句式的表达,图表的辨析和清晰的描述。做好了以上几点,考生们一定可以取得理想的分数。

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