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青岛雅思备考:雅思写作需要注意的用词问题

2018-09-12 09:49     供稿单位: 青岛朗阁     责编:青岛朗阁    浏览

摘要: 说到让青岛雅思备考生最头疼的备考部分,相信就是雅思写作了!雅思写作与听力、阅读、口语不同,它要求大家要更加熟练的掌握词汇的词性,但是我们发现,很多青岛雅思备考生对于词汇的词性和用法掌握得不够

  说到让青岛雅思备考生最头疼的备考部分,相信就是雅思写作了!雅思写作与听力、阅读、口语不同,它要求大家要更加熟练的掌握词汇的词性,但是我们发现,很多青岛雅思备考生对于词汇的词性和用法掌握得不够,这些导致很多考生雅思写作成绩都不是很理想,下面为了帮大家更好的应对雅思写作词汇,青岛朗阁培训老师就带大家来看看雅思写作需要注意的用词问题。

  一:使用具体的动词

  比较具体的描写会让文章看起来更有说服力,这样雅思写作分数当然能得到提高!

  例如:

  1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.

  Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

  2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.

  Better:She compares prices and quality.

  二:表语转化为不同的修饰语

  很多考生不明白什么时候用主动,什么时候用被动,要知道如果不小心用错了,雅思写作分数自然不高!

  例如:

  1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.

  Better:Charity has supported the organization.

  2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

  Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

  三:避免使用语言弱的“be”动词

  1、在“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语.

  例如:

  1) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.

  Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.

  2) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.

  Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.

  2、表语转换为不同的修饰语

  例如:

  Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

  Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)

  The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

  3、作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词

  例如:

  1) Weak:The team members are good players.

  Revision:The team members play well.

  2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

  Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

  四:不要使用语言过长且累赘的词语:

  雅思写作并不是是用的词汇越高深就得分越高,想提高成绩就要用词简单、生动。

  例如:

  1、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

  Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

  2、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

  Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

  3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire

  Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

  4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

  Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores

  五:避免陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语

  雅思是一门语言考试,主要考察烤鸭们的语言运用能力,而写作关键点就在文章的表现力上!

  例如:

  1、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

  I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

  2、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

  好了,以上就是为青岛雅思备考生整理的雅思写作需要注意的用词问题,希望我们的整理可以帮助大家更好备考雅思考试。

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