托福考试中，口语和写作是最能拉开成绩的两部分，单从托福写作来讲，正确理解题目意思、快速写出例子是取得高分的关键，在上一篇 青岛托福培训 中，青岛朗阁已经为大家介绍了如何正确解读托福写作题目，下面，我们继续为大家介绍如何快速写出优秀的例子：

　　一、首先要符合评分标准

　　官方给出的四个评分中的第一条对于考生想例子至关重要：effectively address the topic and task。尽管老师在上课时会反复提及这个准则，但是考生往往忽视它们。

　　请看这道托福写作考试真题：Workers would be much happier if they are doing different types of tasks during their workday than doing the same task.

　　A: they are doing different types of tasks

　　B: doing the same task

　　重心：Workers would be much happier

　　前提条件：during their workday

　　一位考生书写的片段就没有有效地应对话题和任务：

　　Thirdly, workers with different task during working days often have higher salary, which brings him a happy life. 论点里有考题分析的重心和前提条件。

　　My father once had a friend with a double degree in mechanical and computer science. He did both tasks for the company in mechanics and software. Since he did different tasks, he had a salary 50% higher than the other workers and enjoyed a happier and higher quality life.

　　前面书写的例子部分就可以看出问题了，缺少during working day字眼的例子，例子换了概念，写成了做不同类型的工作。

　　This may be the reason why so many students nowadays struggling for a double degree and seeking for jobs with different and complex tasks. 段落末尾的内容又顾左右而言他了。

　　二、 要不断地变换个人身份

　　有的考生说熟悉的话题就很容易想例子，比如：

　　In order to celebrate important events such as graduation or a special birthday, some of them prefer a large party, while some others prefer a small party with only a few close friends and family members.

　　而对于Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.就觉得离自己很遥远。

　　其实考生在书写作文时，适时地把自己当作题目中的已经工作的人，想象一下你自己工作中获得的和你的幸福间的关系;同样An effective leader will make others feel like they are a part of making decision, 考生也可以想想班级的班长、学校的校长、你工作单位的领导，甚至是政府官员，秒杀这道题目就显得很容易了。

　　请看一位高中生写的作文片段：

　　Compared to social life, one’s occupation does help create value for both the company and the society. Accomplishing of jobs plays a key role in assisting us to increase happiness and look for our meaning of life. Take myself as an example, as a programmer, during a competition once I took part in, my team including some of my classmates worked out all the obstacles and finally won a prize within three days. There is no exaggeration to say that it’s the happiest time ever in my life. All of the work paid off at last with the effort of everyone in the team. The sense of achievement brought by the job is much more than social life.

　　从论据书写来看他的身份已经是一个工作的人了。

　　综上所述，在托福写作考试后续的书写中要注意例子的切题，并且想例子的时候要不断变换自己的身份。
 

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