托福独立写作并不是一个难拿分的项目，上课的时候，同学们可以通过老师给出的方法，找到适合自己的写作形式，灵活运用到考试中。上节内容中，老师为同学们分析了一道托福独立写作例题，下面，我们在来分析一道：
 

　　TPO 28:

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　本题也是一道比较明显的教育类今昔对比题，现在的父母比以前的父母更加关注参与孩子的教育了。在解这道题时，也可以从多角度进行解题分析。与过去相比，可以把父母关注孩子的教育进行分类讨论，分为哪些方面参与的更多，也可以从孩子与父母自身的变化来分析本题。

　　Above all, parents nowadays are more concerned about cultivating their children's interest which was not highly valued in the past. On the weekends and holidays, the after-class training courses are often filled with children whose parents pay for them to learn knowledge beyond textbooks. When I was young, I also had to learn plenty of lessons such as chess, writing, piano and so on. Unfortunately, I insist none of these things above when I grow up. However, my parents were really keen to let me do so then.

　　首先，与过去相比，现在的父母更加关注孩子的兴趣培养。论证的时候可以从以前与现在的社会竞争需求，对孩子培养的需求的变化来分析。当然单一的时间对比论证对一个点的论述肯定是不够的，要与其他论证思路进行结合。这里就可以结合自己的例子来分析。

　　Furthermore, parents today are stricter with their kids. They want them to learn what they think highly of. More and more students study abroad which is an unrealized dream of many parents. They have more hope on their kids because many of them have only one kid who is the only one that can make the condition of family better. It was opposite in the past when parents had so many kids that could not afford the expenses for all children to be educated. Take my aunts for instance. Though there are two kids of my grandparents, they could only afford to let my father go to the school. So they were very strict with my father and asked him to study more knowledge.

　　其次，现在的孩子都是独生子女，父母对孩子的期望更高了，也更加严格了。可以从以前的生活条件落后，只能维持温饱，一户人家孩子会有很多个，到现在的条件变好，父母望子成龙望女成凤的心理进行对比分析。

　　Last but not least, the information nowadays seems to expand more and more quickly and parents are more knowledgeable so that they can offer more help to their kids. In the past students just needed to learn harder and harder for the test. But on the contrary, nowadays students face more chances which may let them confused. For example, when choosing the majors and universities, parents can list the pros and cons which students do not know at all. What's more, parents are more experienced about some vital choices on one's road of growing up and they can make their kids have less chance of failure.

　　最后，从父母自身角度变化来分析，将以前的父母和现在的父母进行比较。以前的父母文化素养低，对孩子的学业并不懂并且也无法参与，现在的父母获取信息多，本身也具有文化，可以对孩子进行一定的指导。

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