在托福写作中，很多考生会出现病句，而这些病句会严重影响大家的托福写成绩。在这为了帮助大家更好的避免在托福写作中出现病句，青岛朗阁托福培训老师就为大家汇总了一些在福写作中比较容易出现的病句，大家一起来看看吧。

　　1、 破碎句

　　所谓破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式，如分词)，或者是从句单独成句。

　　破碎句：She singing alone. (无谓语，singing是现在分词)

　　正确句：She is singing alone.

　　破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句)

　　正确句：He did not come because he was sick.

　　2、接连句

　　所谓接连据，就是两个句子直接连在一起，既未使用连词，也未使用正确的标点符号。

　　接连句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　正确句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　正确句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

　　3、句子连接不正确

　　所谓句子连接不正确，就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接，这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。

　　不正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

　　正确句： Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

　　下面三立在线小编在给大家看看托福写作的高分表达：

　　正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.

　　倒装句：Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词位于句首的倒装。)

　　正常句：The internet provides people access to the latest information.

　　强调句:It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (强调the internet)

　　正常句:The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.

　　好了，以上看是青岛朗阁托福培训老师为大家汇总的在托福写作中容易出现的病句，大家看完之后一定要避免哦。

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